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Secrets to Creating Great Headlines

By Catherine Franz

Great! You finished your piece and now need a headline.

Usually headlines are less than ten words and need to be

expressed in short, expressive, active words. This provides

quick focus and pull in. By waiting until you know what you

are ending up with, it will save you time. You can give a

temporary headline while drafting.

If you have a good lead paragraph, you will find the

headline. If you want to intrigue or hook your readers, look

at the significant points instead. Which idea or thought can

you use as that hook.

Here are some tips on how to write that headline:

* Grab a highlighter and underline the nouns and key words

in your lead paragraph.

* From the key words, imagine yourself composing a

telegram, and each word is costing you $10. Avoid articles

-- A, An, The -- and prepositions -- On, Under, Beside, etc.

* Substitute simple but effective synonyms to keywords. Say

"polls" instead of "elections" or "go on" instead of


* Write headlines that are simple and easy to read. Don't

use heavy words. Use words that are short and familiar.

* Directly give your story's main idea at the beginning of

your headline.

* Try and working in the main benefit the reader gets for

reading further. Also, add another benefit in the lead

paragraph, to keep them moving forward.

* Use dynamic and powerful words. Not what you think is

powerful but what you reader is going to think as powerful.

* Always be specific and avoid generalities. "Do this and

you will get this" needs to be specific to be believable.

Provide examples or statistics. Give the result that is

believable to the reader.

* Only use a person's name in the headline if they are well

known. Provide a link to where someone can find out more

about this person.

* Repeating key words, using weak verbs such as a, an, is,

are, or starting the line with a verb is not recommended.

* If you have to use abbreviations, do so only when the

abbreviation is commonly known to your main target market.

Create a footnote for a definition or place the

abbreviations in parentheses.

* Use numbers only if important and write them in figures

-- use B for billion and M for million.

* Even if your statistics are out standing you might night

want to state them. If they are too unbelievable, people

will not buy.

These thirteen tips are not all inclusive to all the tips

and techniques you can use to create headlines. When I

wrote these I wanted to convey some suggestions for the

frequent mistakes I see made or unique recommendations that

will get your headline noticed quickly and build curiosity.

About The Author

Catherine Franz, business and writing coach, resides in Virginia and is a syndicated columnist, radio producer, International speaker, and author. Ezines and other articles:


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